sweetyluli's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[HRRRM]

*3*

Her proportions seem outta wack to me.:/ Also I don't know if you ment to do it, but she looks anorexic. Her arms and waist just seem to skinny. Plus I know how frustrating it can be to use a mouse*3* Trying using a mannequin?

SirCannabisClock responds:

Oi yeah, I have a male and female mannequin and a left hand(I'm left handed so that helps). But all of that falls completely and abominably useless between the wrath of my ungodly glitchy uncontrollable right handed mouse. It hard to really get a decent proportion in being I use the paint brush rather then line tool, since I have to zoom in to 400% just to get a thin line with my mouse.

As for the anorexic standpoint: that was purposeful. She is a very sickly looking character: I guess I didn't make the veins around her skin visible enough.

I do appreciate the input from a fine artist such as yourself. Perhaps you could let me borrow your tablet?

[Fervid Impulse - The Gift]

XD

Aww I feel bad for her XD" I love your coloring. U get an 8 because your proportions are off. But it's still good <3

[Knight]

:D

Love it. I would have liked to see a little bit more blending, But it's still AMAZING. This needs to be FPed XD

[To Find and Not to Capture]

I'm One of them

I am one of them pplz*3*. I think that pencil sketches should not be placed in the regular art portal, but you can still post em in your gallery. Only completed works are ment for the main art portal.

But now time for the real review. The proportions of her upper body are off from her lower body. Also her face frame seems a little off to me. It looks like her head is flat on top. Also the hands seem very boxy lookin to me and need to be rounded There's a couple more things I could say but I'll leave it at that.

Try using mannequins?

Creatus responds:

Its stupid to think there can't be completed pencil drawings. Some of the best art pieces of all time are pencil alone. Have you heard of Escher?

As far a proportions, I guess I should just start drawing anime eh?

[Modern Heroes: Toob of Noobs]

Dude

You just put all my favorite things in one picture. LOVE YOU. Also I really like your style. Some things are off but well, you still get a 10/10 for being awsome.

TheShadling responds:

Well thanks alot, if you know Noobtoob that makes you very awesome on my list.

[(Full of Myself)]

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I have to agree with 7swords again. Looks like a collection of doodles to me...

Creatus responds:

Its a shame that you can't see it for what it is then.

[Virtuostic Maiden : Vocalove]

<3

Super Amazing. I don't understand why it doesn't have more views :/

[Yoko Enjoys a Canyon]

XD

I just got the first Book. I was dissapointed but I hear the Anime is a lot better. I really like her pose and the style you drew her in <3

[oil pirates]

XD

I must say I envy your backgroundage skillz. Your color palette is AMAZING. Great Job as always. <3

[Street Fighter]

Sweet

SWEET SAUCE! I love your shading!