sweetyluli's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[BRS Fan art]

Lelouch

The head looks a lot like Lelouch from Code Geass XD Which I am guessing ur style is influenced on. But yep yep I like the cloths design :)

Fifty-50 responds:

The character design didn't come from me, it came from some awesome guy on Japan. I can't recall his' name. I just liked his' design on girls. So yeah.

[UTAU Bonne aniversaire Mathieu]

:3

The way you did the hair is my favorite part. I love the way you color. You get an 8 because some things are off such as the placement of the nose and the hands look awkward. But I still love it XD

suwako responds:

Hey! Thanks a lot! Oh, yeah, I had a feeling the nose and hands were off... I'm still trying to get used to doing "manly" features, so hopefully I'll get better with some more practice. *makes sure to improve hands & face especially from now on*

Thanks a bunch for the critique and review, I really appreciate it!

[HRRRM]

*3*

Her proportions seem outta wack to me.:/ Also I don't know if you ment to do it, but she looks anorexic. Her arms and waist just seem to skinny. Plus I know how frustrating it can be to use a mouse*3* Trying using a mannequin?

SirCannabisClock responds:

Oi yeah, I have a male and female mannequin and a left hand(I'm left handed so that helps). But all of that falls completely and abominably useless between the wrath of my ungodly glitchy uncontrollable right handed mouse. It hard to really get a decent proportion in being I use the paint brush rather then line tool, since I have to zoom in to 400% just to get a thin line with my mouse.

As for the anorexic standpoint: that was purposeful. She is a very sickly looking character: I guess I didn't make the veins around her skin visible enough.

I do appreciate the input from a fine artist such as yourself. Perhaps you could let me borrow your tablet?

[To Find and Not to Capture]

I'm One of them

I am one of them pplz*3*. I think that pencil sketches should not be placed in the regular art portal, but you can still post em in your gallery. Only completed works are ment for the main art portal.

But now time for the real review. The proportions of her upper body are off from her lower body. Also her face frame seems a little off to me. It looks like her head is flat on top. Also the hands seem very boxy lookin to me and need to be rounded There's a couple more things I could say but I'll leave it at that.

Try using mannequins?

Creatus responds:

Its stupid to think there can't be completed pencil drawings. Some of the best art pieces of all time are pencil alone. Have you heard of Escher?

As far a proportions, I guess I should just start drawing anime eh?

[Modern Heroes: Toob of Noobs]

Dude

You just put all my favorite things in one picture. LOVE YOU. Also I really like your style. Some things are off but well, you still get a 10/10 for being awsome.

TheShadling responds:

Well thanks alot, if you know Noobtoob that makes you very awesome on my list.

[(Full of Myself)]

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I have to agree with 7swords again. Looks like a collection of doodles to me...

Creatus responds:

Its a shame that you can't see it for what it is then.

[There are some Bords]

Nicely Done :D

I really adore the way you painted his face >//u// I would have liked to see a little more blending on his body thou XD" And the bones seem as if they were added in the spur of the moment, I do love the concept thou XD Over all nicely done <3<3<3

Slow-Action responds:

Ah thank you! <3 And yes... i do have the lazy-ness problem....

[Draw With Me Fanart]

XD

I've watched that animation over and over again, And I lurvveee et. I like the fan art that u did. But some things are a little off. But overall it is nice :D

kashidoodles responds:

Yeah, I also see a lot is off. o_- Geh.
But thank you very much. :3 I too have watched Draw with Me over and over. ^^

[{BT} Another Long Day]

:D

Gaahh I really like this! So much detail! Nicely done yo :3

BenTibbetts responds:

Thanks!

[CBBB]

D:

Well I still like it D:! The coloring is my fave on this, but you just need to work on place ment of things. Such as the nose. But I still like it! D:!

PuddingMonster responds:

yep.