sweetyluli's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Draw With Me Fanart]

XD

I've watched that animation over and over again, And I lurvveee et. I like the fan art that u did. But some things are a little off. But overall it is nice :D

kashidoodles responds:

Yeah, I also see a lot is off. o_- Geh.
But thank you very much. :3 I too have watched Draw with Me over and over. ^^

[Lost in my own little world...]

:D

That reminds me of myself! But not punkXD" Beat'n up all them dudes who think Ima little boy! XD Nice job!

[Western Chibi Moon]

This is made of

WIN SAUCE!

[{BT} Another Long Day]

:D

Gaahh I really like this! So much detail! Nicely done yo :3

BenTibbetts responds:

Thanks!

[CBBB]

D:

Well I still like it D:! The coloring is my fave on this, but you just need to work on place ment of things. Such as the nose. But I still like it! D:!

PuddingMonster responds:

yep.

[Page2]

Humm...

So, it looks like you are super influenced by the "Bleach" Manga. My suggestion is to use some Mannequins to help you with placement and proportions. Also I think you should concentrate on how you draw hairXD Even for manga it looks impossible for someone to have hair like that :/
Also you should branch of into your own style than try to imitate others XD" It's not a good thing in the long run XD"
It's a good start thou. Keep on going and you'll get better XD

[mask]

Hermmss

I love the left side of the face, but the right side is all off. It's a lot wider than the left side, and the shading on the lips makes it seem as thou it's bluging out. Mask dosen't look as detailed as the rest of the coloring, and makes it look out of place. But, metal is hard to get right. Is this a WIP or just practice? It could use more detail work. But dude, it's still awsome XD Just pointin out what bothers meh...

desktoppirate responds:

lol its actually two different painting put together thats why everything is off. the title is also deceiving, its not a mask. i dont know what it is really, its just half woman and half gargoyle. thats college work for you... :) i ahve the full painting of the woman's face but i doubt ill upload it. but yeh, long reply...thanks haha