sweetyluli's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[BRS Fan art]

Lelouch

The head looks a lot like Lelouch from Code Geass XD Which I am guessing ur style is influenced on. But yep yep I like the cloths design :)

Fifty-50 responds:

The character design didn't come from me, it came from some awesome guy on Japan. I can't recall his' name. I just liked his' design on girls. So yeah.

[To Find and Not to Capture]

I'm One of them

I am one of them pplz*3*. I think that pencil sketches should not be placed in the regular art portal, but you can still post em in your gallery. Only completed works are ment for the main art portal.

But now time for the real review. The proportions of her upper body are off from her lower body. Also her face frame seems a little off to me. It looks like her head is flat on top. Also the hands seem very boxy lookin to me and need to be rounded There's a couple more things I could say but I'll leave it at that.

Try using mannequins?

Creatus responds:

Its stupid to think there can't be completed pencil drawings. Some of the best art pieces of all time are pencil alone. Have you heard of Escher?

As far a proportions, I guess I should just start drawing anime eh?

[(Full of Myself)]

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I have to agree with 7swords again. Looks like a collection of doodles to me...

Creatus responds:

Its a shame that you can't see it for what it is then.

[There are some Bords]

Nicely Done :D

I really adore the way you painted his face >//u// I would have liked to see a little more blending on his body thou XD" And the bones seem as if they were added in the spur of the moment, I do love the concept thou XD Over all nicely done <3<3<3

Slow-Action responds:

Ah thank you! <3 And yes... i do have the lazy-ness problem....

[Draw With Me Fanart]

XD

I've watched that animation over and over again, And I lurvveee et. I like the fan art that u did. But some things are a little off. But overall it is nice :D

kashidoodles responds:

Yeah, I also see a lot is off. o_- Geh.
But thank you very much. :3 I too have watched Draw with Me over and over. ^^

[{BT} Another Long Day]

:D

Gaahh I really like this! So much detail! Nicely done yo :3

BenTibbetts responds:

Thanks!

[CBBB]

D:

Well I still like it D:! The coloring is my fave on this, but you just need to work on place ment of things. Such as the nose. But I still like it! D:!

PuddingMonster responds:

yep.

[mask]

Hermmss

I love the left side of the face, but the right side is all off. It's a lot wider than the left side, and the shading on the lips makes it seem as thou it's bluging out. Mask dosen't look as detailed as the rest of the coloring, and makes it look out of place. But, metal is hard to get right. Is this a WIP or just practice? It could use more detail work. But dude, it's still awsome XD Just pointin out what bothers meh...

desktoppirate responds:

lol its actually two different painting put together thats why everything is off. the title is also deceiving, its not a mask. i dont know what it is really, its just half woman and half gargoyle. thats college work for you... :) i ahve the full painting of the woman's face but i doubt ill upload it. but yeh, long reply...thanks haha